SONG OF
THE MUNDANE
SHORT LOGLINE
A self narrative journey into the lives of two
friends - one boxer and the other dancer, born and brought up in slums, where
they strive to reach their individual goals in life.
SYNOPSIS (Overview
of story, Main characters, plot points)
The film revolves around the lives of
two friends – Vicky &Vikas, who are professional
dancer and boxer respectively. Both of them have grown up in the same slum
locality of Mumbai. Individually they teach boxing and dancing as well. Vikas and his family has moved out of the slum area to an
apartment in the outskirts of Mumbai but Vicky still resides in that slum
locality and is bearing the responsibility to run the family almost single
handedly. Through the film we explore their hopes and aspirations, the
chemistry and relationship between the two protagonist and how one affects the
other. Apart from these the aspect of importance of a teacher is also an
important pillar of the film. The entire film is self-narrative in nature. We are
also introduced to the boxing coach of Vikas – Mr.
kale, who acts like a narrator in bits and parts. He not only gives us a
background and introduction to Vikas, but also brings
a philosophical angle in the storytelling by relating how boxing is closely
related to life and what important life lessons we get to learn from the sport
of boxing. In the beginning, there is an introduction to Vicky and his dance
class – his struggle and wants. Next we are introduced to Vikas,
his boxing training, his background and we see him winning a boxing competition
while at the same time we come to know his own struggle and we are introduced
to Mr. kale, the boxing coach of Vikas. Then we are
get to see the chemistry between Vicky and Vikas,
their tense past and how they became good friends eventually. The film moves to
show desperation of Vicky to move his family out of the slum area. We come to
know about love interest of Vicky who belongs to a comparatively affluent
family. Here we move more closely to his state of mind which will be achieved
more visually. Then we see Vikas is guiding his
students in a boxing competition. The characters talk about the importance of a
teacher in society. After this we see that Vicky has bought his own apartment
and we see various moments of a day when a hindu
ritual is being carried out prior to starting to live in the new house. Finally
we move to the concluding section where it gives a feeling to the audience that
Vikas and Vicky are part of a huge multitude of
ordinary people who are striving to find happiness and fulfillment by obtaining
the basic necessities of life. The film ends with a positive feeling.
PROJECT DESCRIPTION(Story Structure, Artistic Approach, Visual Look, Feel)
The film is structured into following chapters :
Opening - Apparently we see vicky
and vikas singing, having fun and having a friendly singing
competition. But the audience can also notice that even though they are
friends, they are of completely opposite personality, which does clash with
each other in a very subtle manner, yet they don't burst into some apparent
tussle.
Chapter 1 :
Introduction to Vicky and his own dance class where he teaches dancing to kids,
young boys n girls and middle aged women. He opens about his aspiration,
struggle and journey and we see glimpses of vicky as
a dancer. His tenacity both as a teacher as well as a dancer is visible through
various montages of his dance class. The character of Vicky takes shape through
the dance class montages and also by the way he talks – his simplicity,
determination and innocence is communicated to the audience. Then a point comes
where while he is teaching in his dance class, his inner psychological
monologue (dire need of money in his life) got better of him for a short period
of time. There are contrasting visuals
of an upper class restaurant and locality of Vicky. The individual shots are
mostly long takes. This is like contradiction between want and reality in his
life. Soon after this Vicky briefly tell that the topmost priority in his life
is to get out of slum and have his own apartment.
Chapter 2 : the story
moves to vikas. We see an ongoing boxing tournament,
a montage of boxers fighting and crowd and referee etc while at the same time
we see vikas is practicing in the same premises with
his boxing coach. He is supposed to fight in the final match, which is
scheduled for the next day. The very next day vikas
is preparing for his final match and there is voice over of his coach talking
about vikas. Then we go to the place where vikas and other boxers undergo training with his coach.
Calm paced Montage of training. Introduction to vikas
– how he started boxing, his achievments and audience
also get to know that Vikas has already moved out
from the slum few years ago. Vikas talks about the importance
of his coach. Short Introduction to boxing class of vikas
where he teaches boxing. At some point probably towards the end of this chapter
we go back to the boxing competition where we see vikas
win the final after a tough fight. But it is not necessary that the final fight
of vikas will be shown in a single flow, rather
instead it could keep resurfacing at various strategic points of this chapter. Most of the talking in this chapter comes as
voice over instead of sit down interviews, with spaces between consecutive
lines whereas in visual we see boxing practice and other visuals.
Chapter 3: The mood of this chapter is more of
fun and ease. Vikas has come to Vicky's House and
both of them having fun. Audience comes to know about their history, background,
ups and downs and chemistry between the two in a fun and jovial manner. They
share few incidents of past while through montage we get to see more about the
locality, which blends into the next chapter.
Chapter 4: Overall mood of this chapter is gloomy.
Vicky is desperate to solve financial crisis of his family, he badly wants to
move out of his slum locality. His state
of mind is portrayed more by the use of visuals than by what he says. We see
him trying extremely hard to teach a certain dance step to his students but
they are taking unusually long time to learn it. Vicky feels irritated as a
result. His frustration grows. This frustration formsa kind of collage with the
desperation in his personal life. Pacing is relaxed and long duration shots.
Chapter 5: Visuals of Vikas
teaching boxing to his students. Life is close to boxing – this theme comes up
in the film. Audience see Vikas trying his best to
teach boxing to his students, so is Mr Kale (Boxing
coach of vikas). This theme complements the previous
chapter as well where we felt how Vicky is fighting against his circumstances.
Voice over of Mr Kale mostly throughout this chapter
with appreciable intervals in between. Pacing is relaxed. Shots are mostly of
longer duration. No rapid or fast cutting at all till.
Chapter 6 : This is
more of kind of Chapter 5B, a close continuation of the previous chapter. This
chapter has primarily three different subparts – 1) Vikas
guiding his students during a boxing competition. He is shouting and supporting
them and giving them constant motivation, during a fight and in between. 2) Vikas and Vicky together talk about importance of teacher
in society. 3) Mr kale gives an emotional perspective
towards what should be the role of a teacher, while doing so he breaks down
into tears. Subparts 1 and 2 are cut between each other during this chapter.
Subpart 3 comes only towards the end of the chapter. This chapter will be
constructed as alternating of franticness of subpart of 1 and static nature of
subpart 2 with subpart 3 punctuating the entire chapter.
Chapter 7: We see that Vicky has managed to buy
his own apartment. There is a Hindu ritual/custom or rather worship kind of thing,
which is always carried out when someone steps into a new house. Without this
ritual one cannot start living in that house. This chapter shows certain
moments of that particular day when the ritual/custom/worship is being carried
out at Vicky’s new house. He is supremely happy and gay, so are his parents.
Vicky is showing his house to guests and his own dance teacher with so much
proudness and uncensored honesty and innocence.
Certain visuals of the long and lengthy ritual are also present in that
chapter and how Vicky and his entire family are doing everything with so much
enthusiasm, happiness and seriousness. This is relatively fast paced compared
to other chapters.
Closing: This chapter has few subparts – 1) Voiceover
mostly from Vikas where he talks about importance of
dream, how Mumbai is a city of dream, that hard work always pays off, that
persistence is key. Against these we see various visuals which are combination
of Vicky and Vikas together as well as separately in
pensive and contemplating mood, triumphant and happy moments of both of them,
visuals of Mumbai, freeze frames etc. Towards the middle or end Vicky’s teacher
will talk about real meaning of success – that success is to be happy. 2)
Visual of Vicky’s dance class where all of them are standing in a particular
order and reciting a Hindu chant which is dedicated to the God. The dance class
for the day gets over and everyone disperses. One of the girl dancer
incidentally tells me while I am holding the camera – “bye sir”. 3) Diwali is a
big festival in India where everyone plays with fireworks. We see people busy
celebrating Diwali with lot of fireworks in a certain street of Mumbai and an
old Man is playing music while he is standing in between all these fireworks –
steady, calm and composed. A guy holds a firework in his hand and due to the
excessive light of the firework the screen goes white and we fade to black. END
of the film. These three subparts come in the above mentioned order.
TOPIC SUMMARY / MOTIVATION (Why it is important, timely, relevant and
why I am the best person to make this film)
I have always believed that each of
our lives is a story waiting to be told and irrespective of how ordinary or
inconsequential we are, there is a potentially great film hidden in all our
lives. We can always put a camera in front of a person and follow him for a
certain period of time and we will have a film, a great film – all the time and
this is no exaggeration. Now why it doesn’t happen so much? Our gaze is mostly
bounded by some predefined norms. There is a higher ego inside us which prevent
us to see beyond the shell / cocoon we live in. Even as filmmakers we go for
what glitters from a distance. There is a natural disaster - let’s go make a film, he was a big rockstar, let’s make a film, he did that – let’smake a
film, she did this – let’s make a film, they are so much oppressed – let’s make
a film. All these are fine, but too often the sense of purpose is too
superficial. As a result there is always a sense of distance in the final
outcome, there is everything in it but on the surface. Now someone told me, there
is a guy in theneighborhood who goes to learn dancing, I ask did he won
anything, the answer is no, did he do anything great, the answer is no. I
decide there is a film which will never be made. Why? Because that boy has done
nothing so called significant in his life, so there must be lot of things
waiting to happen. He must be hopeful, anxious, at time depressed, at times
contemplative - all these are internal events and a movie camera always feel
complimented when asked to record internal events of a man, those silent
monologues, hidden in nature as well as human being. Treasure lies in the
ordinary, the daily mundane nittygritties. So I
prefer not to take up a voyage on the sea to discover a continent. I rather
choose to explore my backyard to try to listen to the distant chant of the
trees and inconsequential conversations of the birds which I never paid
attention to, I want to know what happens in my backyard on a daily basis, this
discovery and knowledge is more important for me. I have always admired the
works of filmmakers who took upon the responsibility on themselves to celebrate
humanity with a human touch. I have groomed and schooled myself watching their
films. So one day when I took my camera out to a slum with an objective to
click photographs, Vicky perhaps found me interesting and he came to me and we
started having a conversation. He told me he is a dancer. I found him brutally
honest, same time deceptive and most importantly when he smiles his eyes never
smile, he is sad maybe I thought at that time. I proposed to make a film and he
readily agreed. Soon he introduced me to Vikas. I
found him immensely different from Vicky, diametrically opposite to each other,
yet they are friends. Among all the differences, one thing that was common
between them is I found both of them more wise than
many of those who have a plethora of educational qualifications. I found them
more humanistic. I felt fascinated and realized that this was waiting to be
told. Soon one thing led to another. And
here I am after spending close to 3 years in bits and parts with them; I am
having 30 hours of evidence of their lives and emotions which are ready to be
stitched into one single story.